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Noche XVII Grim, Noche Comic Series

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THE COMIC IS OUT, READ IT HERE -

 

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This is Noche XVII Grim, otherwise known as Noche. She is the main character of the Noche Comic Series.

The release date for NCS is Fall 2013.

Be sure to check it out.


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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Neh-
~Though the picture holds some form of mystery and the feeling of impending doom (for lack of better words) Noche's pose is very bland and simple. Which makes the sketchiness of the line art all the more noticeable.
~The sleek crispness of the logos don't mesh well with the sketchiness of the piece. They look fake or take from some where. I know you made them, but they do not look like a part of the piece.

Yay-
~The shading on this is absolutely fantastic. Noche's eyes especially.
~Your anatomy is really good in this too I see noche got a boob reduction
~I like the way the light contrasts with the shadows in the background and how you placed those same lights on her face and arm. Makes it look like Noche is walking through a forest of cave of some sort.

Conclusion:

Clean up the line art. The less sketchy the piece looks the more serious and finished the piece will feel.

Other then that, very well done!