Here it is, the Preview of The Noche Comic Series.
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**Cues lighting strikes.**
-- On a side note. The reason the Noche Comic Series is coming out a year from now is because. I'm in art school at the moment, so if you like/hate the artwork as it is now. I have a year to improve. So wish me luck.
Yes the Noche Comic Series DOES have a plot. A rather solid one at that. Though it is my first run at doing a comic more so professionally so again.
Wish me luck.
this was done a while ago so when the comic comes out
it'll be even better
people and their awesome comics tempting me into not doing what I need to
they will be on here forever :')
so when you finally get a boring rainy day with nothing to do, you can read it then to lift your spirits :'D
Im glad you like it >w<
I never would've guessed Jeet Kun Do was one of Noche's many talents.
I know of peoples SHEER HATERD of the comic sans :U
but personally, I like it.
or at least a similar varient :U notice how the letters are more condensed and not as thick as normal comic sans.
They don't look as cartoony and silly, but they still have they're curved easy to read font style.
So its a mix of different words :U
if it still bothers you, well I'm sorry.
When the guy with the black thing on his head says 'Hurry ... up', I think the pause between the words contradicts the point he's trying to make, and personally I think it would be better if it was just in one speech bubble. The script is cool though. I would point out though that the speech bubbles could also afford to be bigger; let the letters have more room to sit in. Right now they're looking kinda cramped.
Anything else... nope that's all I can think of to point out. Brownie points for you though for focusing so much on backgrounds. Being able to draw the scenery and establishing a clear setting is something that so many people overlook, so yeah, good on you for the effort :> Naturally as you work longer and study more at your art school you'll be better at body proportions and perspectives so I guess I'll just leave it there :> Good luck with this webcomic!
Ok I'll keep working on my wordings xD
Here's to hoping my drawing improves too xD
Anyways Thank you
I hope that when it comes out a year from now my art (cough cough anatomy cough) will be up to par with the story of the comic
if I may, what do you mean by "SPaG mistakes?"
"she's Escaping" (Why capital letter for E?).
"The desert is a lonely place, Lion." "There's no life" (with the apostrophe)
"Do you think she'll ever recover?" (question mark) "She hasn't spoken a word..." (Please start the sentence with a capital letter."
Correct spelling and punctuation help other people to read your story
We both been busy though, colledge and stuff xD
Anyways thanks I'll try to keep an eye on my spelling more often xD
and your color choices work really well. You have a distinct flavor with it, and that's really good to have.
I'd say all you need to do to improve is to consistently keep studying!
That's what I've been doing the past year, and my improvements been, well, ALOT.
I'd say your main focus of improvement should be anatomy and posing/flow.
and for that just make sure to do gesture drawings and life drawings.
and, if you have money and your willing to buy books.
I know all of the best books for learning that. haha
thats actually the main reason its coming out a year from now instead of today xD
To give me enough time to improve with life drawing classes and stuff
I really apperciate the review. I'll keep trying to improve.
I can't wait to read it~ <3