Sarah Scarlet Re-Sketch

The good:
Sarah has come a long way since she was in the first Noche comic. Just from this I can see her fiery, battle-loving, grungy attitude. Her cloths suit a functionable need of flow while adding support where it is needed. Being a sport fighter myself, I would be ok wearing this in a fight (without the blind fold.... I need to see unlike some people >.> )

I LOVE her new weapon design. Much more versatile then just a ring.

Hobo feet. that is all.

Needs work:

Her hair needs some work. I can tell what you where going for, with the bun and bangs, but it still needs texture. Honestly, I thought her hair was part of the ribbon at first.

With someone like Sarah, I assume she is not super concerned with hygiene. Show it in her hair. Have the natural oils of the skin mat areas of hair, tangles, split-ends. Make areas layered and uneven like it was ripped out during a fight. Keep the style, just give it some personality.

Conclusion:
The character design is great and well-developed, just work on small details to add more depth and life into an already awesome character.